Essay Evaluation

To start off we answered 3 questions based on 1st quarter. We also worked on editing essays. I found this process very interesting. Mr.Rease formed a packet with a few of my classmates essays for this assignment.  Throughout editing these essays,I found out a lot of my classmates creates the same mistakes I would. Some of these essays was really challenging to edit due to the paragraphs not being as organized as it should.  I feel as if this assignment was really a learning experience for us all so we can know what not to do when writing an essay.